Expand as needed. * Oss Wilum - see outstanding objections from failed RFAN. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 17:10, October 30, 2011 (UTC) * Sate Pestage—underlinking, examples of "unknown" OOU perspectives, succession box lacks before-years and after-years, tag in the article, and needs to be used for non-templated citations. Requires more context in numerous places, particularly the beginning of the Bio—too much is left unexplained to the casual, perhaps less knowledgeable reader. Also, a better job needs to be done with handling the conflict of his death; the in-universe part of the article presents speculation on whether he actually died a second time, which is still unwarranted in the Bio in spite of the complexity of the conflict. CC7567 (talk) 07:17, November 17, 2011 (UTC) * In