I need some help with working with what I have got, as well as whether the premise is any good. Please be as harsh as necessary, but always add how I could improve. I am planning on adding more after I get these early kinks out, then I'll get another review. It'll get better as time goes on but make sure to take it as it is not as it will be. Happily unreal (talk) 22:33, July 8, 2016 (UTC)