I'd like to ask your opinion on this matter: do you think we should citing the name of events and cutscenes in character profile? I personally think that we're trying to tell readers a story here, so it just seems not very well-written if we make reference in the middle of a paragraph. Take Juliana Everhart article for example, its writing style is very cohesive and neat. [Arcius]File:From major general to marshal signature.png 12:34, September 5, 2011 (UTC) Opinion?? [Arcius]File:From major general to marshal signature.png 08:32, September 8, 2011 (UTC)
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| - I'd like to ask your opinion on this matter: do you think we should citing the name of events and cutscenes in character profile? I personally think that we're trying to tell readers a story here, so it just seems not very well-written if we make reference in the middle of a paragraph. Take Juliana Everhart article for example, its writing style is very cohesive and neat. [Arcius]File:From major general to marshal signature.png 12:34, September 5, 2011 (UTC) Opinion?? [Arcius]File:From major general to marshal signature.png 08:32, September 8, 2011 (UTC)
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| - I'd like to ask your opinion on this matter: do you think we should citing the name of events and cutscenes in character profile? I personally think that we're trying to tell readers a story here, so it just seems not very well-written if we make reference in the middle of a paragraph. Take Juliana Everhart article for example, its writing style is very cohesive and neat. [Arcius]File:From major general to marshal signature.png 12:34, September 5, 2011 (UTC) Opinion?? [Arcius]File:From major general to marshal signature.png 08:32, September 8, 2011 (UTC) I think... you're right. Somehow, I don't feel it is necessary to put event's name, if it is avoidable. I can imagine that.... However, Juliana has no notable event with Avan aside of main story (which people won't bother about the event's name) and minor daily life events. Hmm... dunno, but perhaps it is worth trying to cut it to make cohesive profile stories.... any other opinions?....Prince of IceFile:From 2nd lieutenant to colonel signature.png 13:24, September 8, 2011 (UTC)
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