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* Garik Loran. It's on the RFAN page right now, but we can vote to remove it at the meeting. Here are my beefs:
* 2007-level of detail in the Yuuzhan Vong War section. A single sentence covering The Unifying Force isn't enough. A lot of missing context in this section and throughout the entire article to boot.
* Article alternates between "Face" and "Loran," should probably pick one. A lot of first names are used for other characters throughout.
* CSWE hasn't been checked for info or added to the sources section.
* Needs a copy-edit and quite a bit of expansion. Intro and P&T could use a lot of beefing. Menkooroo 04:21, January 14, 2012 (UTC)
* Unfortunately, as a result of some new info courtesy of Leland Chee, some featured articles need to be
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* Garik Loran. It's on the RFAN page right now, but we can vote to remove it at the meeting. Here are my beefs:
* 2007-level of detail in the Yuuzhan Vong War section. A single sentence covering The Unifying Force isn't enough. A lot of missing context in this section and throughout the entire article to boot.
* Article alternates between "Face" and "Loran," should probably pick one. A lot of first names are used for other characters throughout.
* CSWE hasn't been checked for info or added to the sources section.
* Needs a copy-edit and quite a bit of expansion. Intro and P&T could use a lot of beefing. Menkooroo 04:21, January 14, 2012 (UTC)
* Unfortunately, as a result of some new info courtesy of Leland Chee, some featured articles need to be updated. See Forum:SH:More Mos Eisley Madness. I believe the FA's in question are just Solomahal and Mosep Binneed. Additionally, now that Mosep is confirmed to be in Return of the Jedi, he could potentially appear in adaptations too. Hanzo Hasashi 18:21, January 16, 2012 (UTC)
* Shoaneb Culu - latest edit requires sourcing plus probably cleanup. Toprawa and Ralltiir 18:13, January 17, 2012 (UTC)
* Bevel Lemelisk - Recent edit requires heavy cleanup at the very least. I wouldn't be opposed to outright reversion based on absolutist interpretation and assertion of material. Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:09, January 19, 2012 (UTC)
* I've undone the edit. There was never really an inconsistency to be cleared up regarding Lemelisk --- canon still credits him as the designer of the Death Star's final product, and the contributions of Dooku and Sienar don't change that. There was some Death Star-related retconning done by the novel Death Star, but none of it concerned Lemelisk, as his canon was still OK. Menkooroo 03:42, January 28, 2012 (UTC)
* Orrimaarko- this slipped my mind. Needs an update from The Movie Trilogy Sourcebook. He isn't mentioned specifically AFAIK, but there is some relevant info that I think pertains to all the strike team, and others shared my views. The Rebellion Era Sourcebook also has relevant info. If needed, I can give the info to somebody. Hanzo Hasashi 05:15, January 25, 2012 (UTC)
* Adas - This edit shows that an update is required. I'm not sure how much of an update or what the whole thing would be with that, but I think it's worth checking into at the very least.—Cal JediFile:Infinite Empire.svg (Personal Comm Channel) 21:36, January 27, 2012 (UTC)
* I removed the update tag, as Book of Sith isn't scheduled to be released until February 10th. Menkooroo 02:34, January 28, 2012 (UTC)
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