user:MaddMax has assigned me with the duty of cleaning up this once deleted thing. Note to anyone who does not get it, the MS Paint Images here are a direct parody of the Wikipedia article of the same name (-the user:Ggarfield/ bit). Thanks. -- 21:37, 14 December 2007 (UTC) Mine! No-one take it =)
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| - Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/User:Ggarfield/Sex Positions
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| - user:MaddMax has assigned me with the duty of cleaning up this once deleted thing. Note to anyone who does not get it, the MS Paint Images here are a direct parody of the Wikipedia article of the same name (-the user:Ggarfield/ bit). Thanks. -- 21:37, 14 December 2007 (UTC) Mine! No-one take it =)
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| - It's a bit of an ugly page, shaping-wise. I think the pictures need to be balanced out, size-wise so that the article flows properly. There are a few grammar mistakes in there, and the quotes need to be properly 'd instead of just italicising it. It's mostly the pictures that make it ugly though, not just through sizing but through the actual pictures in themselves. See below
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| - Great idea for an article and I think on the whole that idea for a page is a pretty needed one: Why wasn't there a page on sex positions before is beyond me! Either way, ywr filling a void in that should have been filled and that's very commendable :)
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| - Lacks a certain... panache. As a whole the article is a parody of Wikipedia's page so it should be written in Wiki-prose . There's some good funnies in there, such as the wonderfully OTT "open-faced reverse missionary sex position with lettuce, tomatoes, pickles, and hollandaise sauce". However, the article really needs to be increased in length, and, if yew please, take away and replace some of the randomness in the article . What yew need to do is keep some coherence together and maybe undo the Uncyclopedia clichés in there . That way, ywr article could be great!
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| - And definitely, once yew are done, yew should put it in the mainspace. A sex positions parody needs is place on here! ^_^
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| - user:MaddMax has assigned me with the duty of cleaning up this once deleted thing. Note to anyone who does not get it, the MS Paint Images here are a direct parody of the Wikipedia article of the same name (-the user:Ggarfield/ bit). Thanks. -- 21:37, 14 December 2007 (UTC) Mine! No-one take it =)
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