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| - My first review period! All in all, great feedback and wellwishings. Reviews responses are in BOLD. 001 On the whole, I'd say you were doing well. But this isn't about platitudes. Under the heading Constructive Criticism, I'd say you could be a bit less severe, and a little more compassionate. 002 Could stand to be more visible; I've been on the MUSH for 6 months, and maybe talked to her once. 009 Run more plots, especially more ones that connect to other stuff. It was really cool when Blueshift did a lot of two week plots that all led into each other. Do that!
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| - My first review period! All in all, great feedback and wellwishings. Reviews responses are in BOLD. 001 On the whole, I'd say you were doing well. But this isn't about platitudes. Under the heading Constructive Criticism, I'd say you could be a bit less severe, and a little more compassionate. 002 Could stand to be more visible; I've been on the MUSH for 6 months, and maybe talked to her once. 003 Backfire has done a great job so far. Even before his admin bit, his TPs always felt like there were actually an effort being spent on giving players a fun time and not just some run-of-the-mill sort of half-assed TP that was thrown together haphazardly to meet a quota or something. Thank you for the polished and in-depth TPs you've been providing us. Players -can- tell quality when they see it. If anything, we need more TP staffs like you. 004 To be honest I haven't participated in any of your plots, except the DRE thing a while back, which kinda petered out. I do hope you learned from it, though! But from what I gather, the plots you've run were done well, and liked by the players. Good job! you're also Cyclonus, whom I haven't yet interacted with, but I hope to do so soon. I think the most I can say right now is to tell you to keep your chin up, and realize that you're actually doing a stellar job on the TP staff, despite being so new! 005 I'd liked to welcome Backfire to the staffer family and justly so, extend my condolences. It's not easy being an admin, but I feel Backfire had done a great job in hitting the ground running. Any time a scene or TP can get run, it's a plus for everyone and the more options we have hopefully draw bigger crowds to our place in mush-land. Just as planned scenes are great, I'd enjoy some impromptu stuff as well. Nice to log on sometimes and just catch something that's about to randomly start. Thanks Backfire. 006 Great job so far as a TP staffer. I see things being run for Autobot and Decepticon alike with plenty of room, which is nice. Glad to see an even spread of plots for the good guys and the bad. Also like how prompt replies are about TP questions when an idea springs up and some assistance is needed to work it out. Keep up the good work. 007 Backfire, I love your enthusiasm and your drive in TPstaff duties. Sometimes it feels like you're getting plots going and getting RP rolling through sheer determination. ;) I also like the variety in your scenes, from wacky hijinks with Backfire to more serious military type scenes with Cyclonus to a mix of the two with Impactor. I don't have any criticism specifically for you, but I do have a suggestion that I think could be applied to a lot of the recent TPs. I feel that when planning the plots out, there's not a lot of room for unexpected to happen, either due to player actions or creativity or due to the makeup of who shows up for that scene. In other words, it feels like many plots are going to have this one ending, no matter who shows up on the scene or what anyone involved tries to do. 008 Backfire is easy to get ahold of and accepts feedback on his plot ideas from those who are involved in them, which is great, some consensus-seeking is really nice as long as it still allows for status quo shifts (which he does). 009 Run more plots, especially more ones that connect to other stuff. It was really cool when Blueshift did a lot of two week plots that all led into each other. Do that!
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