Captain Nerd 20:37, 1 May 2009 (UTC) Made it in 20 minutes, based on a real BSoD, my second article, please comment on my my userpage after you review it
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| - Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Your Computer Has Crashed
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| - Captain Nerd 20:37, 1 May 2009 (UTC) Made it in 20 minutes, based on a real BSoD, my second article, please comment on my my userpage after you review it
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Mcomment
| - The problem is, this is too short to be considered a truly great article. I understand that there isn't much room for expansion here, but that's really the trade-off you get for writing an article with this kind of content.
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Pcomment
| - It looks good. It is written seriously with funny content, and that gets good results.
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Icomment
| - You don't have any images. I suppose images don't really apply here, so I'm averaging your scores and then taking a little off.
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Ccomment
| - Microsoft bashing. Love it. I can believe that it was based on a real BSoD. The problem with it is it doesn't leave much room for expansion, which hurts your score.
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Hcomment
| - Got some quick laughs from it. Nothing to really say here.
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| - It's a good quickie. I think that's all it's ever really going to be. If you expand it too much, you'll probably ruin it's charm. As I said before, it's a trade-off.
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| - Captain Nerd 20:37, 1 May 2009 (UTC) Made it in 20 minutes, based on a real BSoD, my second article, please comment on my my userpage after you review it
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