Cleaned up and resubmitted. Removed most of the {{c}} tags, and added two new images. 17:25, 3 July 2007 (UTC)
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| - Uncyclopedia:Pee Review/Norelco (resubmit)
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| - Cleaned up and resubmitted. Removed most of the {{c}} tags, and added two new images. 17:25, 3 July 2007 (UTC)
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| Mcomment
| - Generally just lacking anything special, and there are still a few issues that should be fixed, as I have mentioned above.
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| Pcomment
| - Linking to actual articles in the style you have done can be funny. However, in this they are all redlinks, and that is just ugly.
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| - The images are undoubtedly the best part of this article. Good stuff.
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| Ccomment
| - I tend to enjoy company related articles more when they are constructed around a basic, funny, satirical idea. This is lacking in satire.
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| - Not bad, but not hilarious either. More jokes would help.
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| Fcomment
| - I doubt that this has a chance on VFH at the moment. You should at least fix the redlinks first.
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| - Cleaned up and resubmitted. Removed most of the {{c}} tags, and added two new images. 17:25, 3 July 2007 (UTC)
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