This concept possesses all the hallmarks of a typical NCF article. These are things to avoid. * A large number of uncommon and rare vehicles and weapons. Titans are rare artefacts that belong to the Mechanicus, not Space Marines. There is no reason for them to possess them. * Illogical home world and origin. Usually extreme or over the top, in this somewhat exaggerated case we see a scenario which is almost entirely possible. * Size. Space Marine Chapters are universally around 1,000 Marines, even the Black Templars. We do not allow Chapters over 1,000 Marines without admin permission. * Name. Unfitting and grammatically lacking name.